Eric Paddon
Member
I always thought the story of the Inquiry with Senator Smith as a focal point character would make for a good drama to frame the story.
Unfortunately......this wasn't it. The laughable conceit of the female reporter who sneaks aboard the Carpathia to listen in on Smith's confrontation with Ismay and who later gets kicked in the face by J.P. Morgan AND who then becomes Smith's conduit for finding out about the Californian had me doing multiple face palms. And where the heck was Ernest Gill? If you don't give us the context of him appearing and the news about the Californian seeing rockets the whole criticism of the Californian makes no sense in the narrative.
Unfortunately......this wasn't it. The laughable conceit of the female reporter who sneaks aboard the Carpathia to listen in on Smith's confrontation with Ismay and who later gets kicked in the face by J.P. Morgan AND who then becomes Smith's conduit for finding out about the Californian had me doing multiple face palms. And where the heck was Ernest Gill? If you don't give us the context of him appearing and the news about the Californian seeing rockets the whole criticism of the Californian makes no sense in the narrative.